Feedback from our Pitch

We used Prezi to present our Pitch to our class and teachers. 

After our Pitch we gained some valuable feedback from our peers:

• We should change the way our character dies in the end, we cannot use a toy gun in an outdoors setting as this is a risk to ourselves and others, although it's not real, however as we have altered our opening, there will be nobody getting killed at the ending. Therefore, instead we created a series of flashbacks viewing Damien's 'madness', as having a killing in the beginning we would be giving too much away from the audience. 
• Another query from our peers was the range of shots we would be using. We explained we aimed to use a wide variety of shots, from high angled shots to show Kaylin walking home, as well as extreme close-ups to show Kaylin and Damien typing. Our class also were intrigued by our idea of just viewing Damien from the nose down, not exposing his eyes, which links to our title 'Anonymous' creating tension from the very start of our thriller. 
• For our titles, we explained the title sequence for the T.V series 'Breaking Bad' which uses chemical symbols to spell out names, we aim to replicate this idea but through the use of social networking logos. 

With this feedback we aim to work on our faults as well as improve our thriller.